The Machine

BombayNight · #2 08-19-2009, 08:50 AM

it's nice to see it finished

well i'm to late to comment on your wip..but i think it will be more nice if u add some smoke or fog

anyway..it's a good job i think

Timmer · #3 08-19-2009, 08:11 PM

Thanks a million for the kind words Bombay

Your comment about the smoke/fog is a good one ... i simply did not think of that, but it would go very nice with this scene indeed.
Maybe i'll make another render in the near future

GrtZ, Tim

sectora · #4 08-30-2009, 08:50 PM

Hi Tim,

You have done a great job! I still like the shapes of the object in the main part of the composition because it draws in the eye and makes the viewer want to investigate.

There are still some spots of symmetry in the texturing of the metal but they'll be invisible for the causal viewer.

Now back to the power cables pole!

Albert

Timmer · #5 09-01-2009, 01:52 AM

Hi Albert,

Thanks a lot for your comment, means a lot to me!
I know about the repetitive 'rust' texture on the main objects, i did not see that before i rendered the final > maybe i'll fix it in the near future, but i honestly think that i am not going to ... let's say it is part of the learning process

and this way i have to be sure that in my next final (Power Pole scene) there won't be any texture flaws at all!

GrtZ, Tim

Cesariuss · #6 10-26-2009, 12:57 PM

You did a great job here. I cant believe how much details it haves. I would like to know how much time took you to make this hugue scene

Timmer · #7 10-28-2009, 01:24 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Cesariuss

You did a great job here. I cant believe how much details it haves. I would like to know how much time took you to make this hugue scene

Thank you for the comment Cesariuss, much appreciated!
This scene took me about (i am making the best guess i can here) 70 hours for modelling and texturing. If i should start again now it would take less time since this is my very first (finished) scene.

GrtZ, Tim

Cesariuss · #8 11-01-2009, 01:16 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Timmer

Thank you for the comment Cesariuss, much appreciated!
This scene took me about (i am making the best guess i can here) 70 hours for modelling and texturing. If i should start again now it would take less time since this is my very first (finished) scene.

GrtZ, Tim

Wow! It was a long way,

but i think this much work paid off,

You inspired me in learning more about modelling in C4d, im gonna search for some tutorials, if you know about some usefull link, just let me know

Timmer · #9 11-04-2009, 03:53 PM

Thanks a lot Cesariuss, always great to inspire people!
There are like a million tutorial sites on the web, but definately check this one > http://www.pariahstudios.co.uk/Tutorials.html
I will PM you a bunch of other links once i get home, hopefully that helps.

GrtZ & thanks again for your comment(s),

Tim

ilhamks · #10 11-06-2009, 10:27 AM

nice..i like the details...